A Miracle Worker and Angela’s Ashes are two films in which we can
find not only differencies but olsa similarities. They are different because in
Miracle worker Hellen is more determined to reach something but in Angela’s
Ashes Frankie earns some money after he works a lot of hours but he goes to
drink as before his father did. They also have some similarities for example;
no matter how Frankie and his family are poor, Frankie believe himself that he
will change his life like heroine of Miracle Worker film Hellen who is blind
and deaf in Miracle Worker film because Hellen also doesn’t let obstacles to
stop her from her success like Frankie. In conclusion both of films contain
some samething plot but not much.
Hi rızgar:-)
YanıtlaSilfirstly i dont't wanna criticize your paragraph badly so I'm very sorry:(but i think your paragraph is very poor.You should improve your paragraph.Especially you should improve your supporting sentences in your paragraph.In addition; relationship between some of your sentences isn't clear.they are irrelevant each other.And you make some small mistakes.For example; olsa:also , samething:something.So if you improve your paragraph, it will be better:-)